Very good

Very complete for a pilot (at least by newgrounds standards...), the effects were effects, as was the sound, the only thing that needs work is the character design, they look good, but are far too comical for this type of flash.

I hope this gets completed, Good Luck.

not terrible

style was pretty good, though it doesn't take a genious to reanimate a movie trailer with game consoles, I'd be more interested to see charcters from their games in battle, rather than the consoles themselves.

meh

as above, nothing too interesting here, 1, lay off the motion tween, it makes actions look mechanical, 2, don't compensate for an overly short movie by slowing down pace (longer does not necisarily equal better if all you've done is stretched it out), 3, I'd personaly rather see more life-like action as aposed to a couple of frames of carfully draw characters, my advice is try doing some action animation with stick figures frame by frame, i dont mean crappy side view zoomed way out, just good close camera angles, drawn with stickfigures to save you time while allowing you to practice your motion. keep it up, good luck

not bad

not too bad, although I gave it a 0/5, I only did so because no one wants to play a game in which there is only one rediculessly easy level, develop this into a full game and it could potentially be quite fun.

what was there wasn't bad...

the style and music were nice, only problem was, it was too short and pointless to have been worth watching in hind sight... in hind sight, it probly didn't diserve the 0/5 i gave it for being to short and unfinished, so, sorry for that...

a response

sorry to use the review system to respond, but i read zephrons review and your response and though I should say somthing. Logicaly (sorry, im in cs too) if homosexuality can be considerd involuntary, so could lazyness, or any other attribute of a human. Assuming an athiest perspective, human beings could, given the resources, be quantified completly, which would make all aspects of their beings down to their very thoughts, emotions, and reactions classifiable as involuntary, as their actions would be no more than a very complicated function of their current state and situation.

Personaly, I don't beilive that to be true, only because I beilive god diferentiates between humans and machines, though in what capacity I do not know.

I don't mean to be argumentative, thats just my 2 cents :)

Awsome!!!

My second Favorite song on the portal, Build well, Love the pianoisness of it in perticular!